Evolution of my bars:freestyle

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RandyRhino's Notes

Just me fucking around with a couple of spare minutes

Each paragraph gets better, hence : 'Evolution'
The highlights are what kind of rhyming each paragraph contains.
This can be used as a guide to new rappers to see what level they are at.
 
#1 (#single #syllables)
Rappad helped me get better with rap
When i first started rapping this is how i really spat
My flow was whack
And i thought i was black
And had a mac
 
#2 (#Multi #End #Rhymes)
Then i got better and used measured rhymes
I thought i was pro with my clever lines
I finally wrote decent bars and treasured mines
 
#3 (#Internals #and #multi #end #rhymes)
But then i got even more complex with the lyrical syllables
Seeing more success with my concepts it was a mystical miracle
I didn't even bust yet but screamed 'fuck yes' it was typical my rhymes were sicker but minimal
 
#4 (#More #Internals, #indirects, #multis #and #loads #of #bowls)
Finally i'm at the point where i can spit quick...
Using multiple syllables a minute it looks like i'm spitting to the limit
Sicker than the sickest / I inhibit my rigid lyrics
Hitting the big spliffs while i'm spitting vicious
Complicit with an illicit business of the biggest bigots
That ever witnessed the timid misfits who appeared on the listed hitlist
The minute your spirit pivots and hits the limit
I'll send a gang of villainous midgets with the assistance of diligent bishops
If you have another insolent bitch fit
They will diss your dissonance and rip your ligaments 'n' dick quick
 
Who knew i could rip these lyrics
This is like a striptease snippet in fifteen minutes

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