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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • You know the older you get the more you got to get off your chest
  • Life aint atrip its a test till the last breath, And if you ever listened to sense
  • I want this to be the context that you process..
  • There is no such thing as unconditional happiness
  • The faster we can not be mad about this is when you start to witness
  • How truly beautiful this place is...Who says rain ruins picnics!
  • Its idiots that ruin the rain, I spent some many years keeping up with the Jones
  • I didn't notice that my focus as Father wasn't the focus that bothered my son and daughters
  • Then I would get hot and bothered call um spoiled rotten point out all shit I bought um
  • I broke my back for everything we've gotten, You kids don't know shit about coming from the botton
  • My Dad it didn't bother um so he didn't have ambition to be a better Father we are complete opposites
  • I'm an Opportune he's an opportunist and growing up I knew this, I was embarrassed when I compared him to other parents
  • I promised my self my kids would never be embarrassed of their father and Ill be this way till I die
  • Why are you both starting to Cry! Did you here my truth I finely let loose after all these years of keeping it cooped
  • Dad I don't believe shit and neither do you. We seen you when he left you never been so upset
  • And that coming from the bottom is bullshit I seen pictures with him and all his kids
  • His house might not been as big as this bullshit you got us living in, We got rooms you never go in
  • You got boat but never float in, You got a beautiful wife you should be holding tight every night
  • Your beautiful big house is so fucking kayo tic have you seen this have you seen that
  • Hurry honey I got back before I miss this plane, The ubers running late great its about to RAIN!
  • Not son im sorry I missed your game, Not your oldest daughter's engaged and you dont even know his name
  • And if you think Mom is ok...Your deranged its gonna be over, Do you think a New Range Rover is better then a shoulder for lean on
  • You can dream on, and you can take all that bullshit of break down and move on, And I swear to god if you say ANOTHER BAD THING ABOUT MY PAPPA...iTS ON..iLL TAKE YOU OUT ON THE FRONT LAWN
  • I swear to God don't test Ill beat your ass in front of your whole gated community
  • Dad there is nothing else you have to do for me or the girls you have everything you need or want in this world
  • Fuck that job I swear to god If you want to live the rest of your lonely this big old house with nobody keep worrying about that money
  • My son reminded me of somebody and I embody I was wasn't fooling nobody I looked up tears in my eyes and said Father Im sorry
  • Then the drops got heavier as they hit my face, Lighting was striking and making the ground shake
  • Ever other family ran for cover and covered up...I opened my arms wide and reached um high and the rain wash all the programing away, After that day my life changed!!

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Think I forgave in haste
  • But the crossness kept, with an unsafe embrace
  • I do not crave the taste, of your apology food
  • 'Cause now the flavor laced, with an unsav'ry baste
  • Marinating in the gut feeling you'll still behave this way.
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  • Like it's all gravy, hey
  • Put on a nice act, B-R-A-V-A
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  • You cannot just wave away, an unwavering trace
  • Keep saving face and I may've to replace your aftershave with Mace
  • Or would it be depraved to flay, with a glaive I slay
  • 'Cause I might cave like Jason by my inner waif's dismay
  • Who they've abased, through vouchsafed hearsay.
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  • For every time you'd rant and rave in nays, on ya high horse
  • Navel-gazin' at ya chafed vajay
  • Loose lips sink ships, but 
  • No shockwave erased my naval base
  • 'Cause I stave each stray, then I strafe my prey
  • At the last raven's bray, see how a rara-avis play
  • I'm a maven ace, if it's words you tryin'a go tit-for-tat with
  • It's like a trave, this trés-ring circus and its mental gymnastics
  • Forget a spa treatment I don't lave WITH clay, I lave LIKE Clay, Cassius
  • Against ya little conclave of chaste finger-wavin' two-faced slaves of J-
  • E-S-U-S, saved you pray, to no A-V-A-I-L, more radio-silence, than an airwave delay
  • Well, by the way
  • What's a 'graven display'? Tell me what else, Moses engraved on clay
  • Not a Communion wafer tray, with Father David's J- 
  • A-D-O-O, Wizards of Waverly Place
  • Blessed, since the nave I stray, but a knave you place in L-A-V-A
  • Where Yahveh microwaves the lay, for thinking He was AFK
  • While His favored stay in a haven space, and what He gave you, in Grace
  • Was diabetes.
  • Now what's a haven space without a Scandinavian buffet?
  • No more Starbucks J-A-V-A
  • Need that riboflavin, A-vitamins, dare I ask if the flavor laced
  • With bitterness.
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  • It's almost safe to say 
  • I wouldn't leave a grave bouquet, on this dead relationship
  • I don't burn bridges
  • But I ain't gonna pave leeway
  • 'Cause until I learned what gaslighting was, I didn't realize
  • That I forgave in haste.

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