Battles  YBD vs ATE

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Write about someone you loved who passed, left you, went missing etc.

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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DEFENDER'S RAP

  • we met when we were in fourth, he was from up north, white of course
  • our friendship has no metaphors, I hate stores, he never had chores
  • we were wild on the horse, not a Porsche, never remembered the scores
  • he was from illonios, had no choice but to move to Royce
  • he left, we didn't stay connected, I felt tempted to feel neglected
  • I felt tempted to feel offended, but accepted our exit as he headed
  • as a good kid to a mad city sorry Kendrick, I'm not poetic I'm pathetic
  • i felt sick, no longer went out into the public, looked out for his chick
  • call him stage 4 cuz he's chronic, but if im being honest he made me modest
  • to keep in touch he promised, when he didn't it was the hardest, i felt the darkest
  • i wished, and it did, this one day during the hottest harvest of august
  • i saw him vomit, on a carpet from the harvest market, not target
  • RING! it was all just a dream, i let out a scream, began to cry a stream
  • thought it was His fault some elaborate scheme, to take away my gleam, ruin my esteem
  • but i learned that He was supreme, tho not mainstream, counted to daydream
  • he hasn't been forgotten, his thought is common when im in the garden
  • i had to keep on movin', unless i wanted to start smokin', but i was foreign
  • like i said, he won't be forgotten, cuz i haven't fallen, im not rotten
  • but i do like, he is from compton, i beg your pardon, cuz im far done

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