Battles  A-J vs KO-Doomzday

RULES

I challenge a true poet. 4 sets of 4 lines. Less then 100 words total. Share with me a memory and I'll share one of mine.

Max of 16 lines

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Darkness swells in swirling smoke
  • My heart revels in burning hope
  • Taut inhales the words unspoke
  • On this tale I twist and choke
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  • Suffocating on regret
  • I undertake a lonely quest
  • What a waste is such a breath
  • When used to pray till nothing's left
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  • Waging war on mind and soul
  • The wage is more than time foretold
  • Paid in poor health I behold
  • The way towards this final fold
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  • Define the lock and hide the key
  • A secret kept inside besieged
  • Take the time to tie the teeth
  • Or betray the lie that lies beneath

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Cold rain knew the struggle I face
  • From traumatic experiences to the music, my taste
  • The cold rain was an audience, bigger than anything you could dream of
  • I write raps, it's the last thing you thought or seen of
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  • Cold rain knew the struggle I face
  • Calling rap dead, but summer, I aced
  • Dead down, dirt cover, I raced
  • Well in rap I've been nerfed by my race
  • 'Cause everything's against me in this Earth, it's a chase
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  • Cold rain knew the struggle I face
  • Because only memories could encapsule the covered up race
  • The trees danced and snowflakes flurried
  • Now it's winter, done rushed and hurried

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