Battles  mi_payasita_55 vs SethTheSpitter

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just for kicks, wanted to know what the response would be to something short and new I wrote today.

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • I am not the reckless youth
  • I fought for this through nail and tooth
  • I depended on the past
  • Though as a mist, it couldn't last,
  • I grasped at straws, I didn't have
  • I built it up, came up with half,
  • Gathered pieces in my hands,
  • I hit the streets with my demands,
  • I plead for truth instead of lies,
  • I see destruction in the skies,
  • I am a product of the myth
  • In which every major corporation hides
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  • I am not the rebel child
  • I am softspoken and mild,
  • I would like to stay asleep
  • But the choice is mine to keep
  • I will resist tempations
  • I will avoid the nation's
  • Pressure to succumb
  • I am not the average numb
  • If you come to me with words
  • Meant for purposes obscure
  • I will turn my head from you,
  • For the Devil plays that too,
  • I'm the heartbeat of an ending for
  • The revolution means befriending or
  • At least communicating with
  • All sides and all the mental widths
  • I am a scheme, that threatens to rise
  • I am a product of the myth
  • In which every major corporation hides

DEFENDER'S RAP

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  • Gotta be on my way now
  • Yeah, yeah-yeah
  • Gotta be on my way now, I've been chasin' dreams, uh
  • Ballin' everyday now like the MVP
  • Coulda stopped at any time, but then I wouldn't be free
  • Coulda followed everybody, but then I wouldn't be me
  • Yeah-yeah, yeah, I'm on my way, my way, my way
  • Had to do it my way, had to do it my way
  • Yeah, I'm on my way, my way, my way
  • Had to do it my way, had to do it my way
  • Yeah, I'm tryna live my dreams
  • Gotta put the work in like the MVP
  • I know that the devil's always testin' me
  • But I got these angels that's protectin' me
  • Yeah, yeah, I know I been climbin'
  • I'm under pressure, but pressure makes diamonds
  • Ten thousand hours, I'm puttin' the time in
  • They dimmin' my light, but I know I'll be shinin'
  • Followin' God and my intuition, a man on a mission
  • The way that I'm livin', I live in the future
  • I'm seein' the vision, it's just the beginnin', I know I'm committed, uh
  • I know that I'm gettin' back to my ways
  • I'm never doubtin', I'm havin' the faith
  • My time to eat, now I'm grabbin' the plate
  • Know it's my time, and I'm havin' my way
  • I don't play no games, yeah, overcame the pain, yeah
  • I know I'm here to stay, yeah, I know I'm on my way, yeah
  • Gotta be on my way now, I've been chasin' dreams, uh
  • Ballin' everyday now like the MVP
  • Coulda stopped at any time, but then I wouldn't be free
  • Coulda followed everybody, but then I wouldn't be me
  • Yeah-yeah, yeah, I'm on my way, my way, my way
  • Had to do it my way, had to do it my way
  • Yeah, I'm on my way, my way, my way
  • Had to do it my way, had to do it my way

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