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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • The little girl knelt before the tome and recited the passage in its cursive language and poked
  • her finger with the tip of the knife, pressing the blood against the bottom of
  • the page. sparks crimson ink lifted off the page like a storm of snakes braiding upon
  • themselves. a terrible, beautiful woman, covered in cursive lettering of the
  • sutra, appeared before the girl.
  • ---"why do you summon me little one? are you too stupid to know that i find no
  • joy in this disgusting human world. speak before i return to ash with you at
  • my side."
  • ---"please. help my mommy. they hurt her. really bad. they hurt her really bad,"
  • ---The woman, Ammit, as that is her sacred title, sighed. "oh how I despise my oath
  • to bear out justice when the weak and vulnerable ply my heart. stay here little
  • girl and lock the door."
  • ---with that, Ammit exited the small bedroom where she was confronted by three men
  • who stood before her. passing a bottle around, with their belts undone and sloppily laughing.
  • One stepped foward to grab her, but he was easily deflected. the other two also
  • advanced but she swayed past them with a seductive grace and looked into
  • the room from which they had just emerged.
  • ---the motionless body of a woman lay there, ensnared by lengths of coiled sheets and
  • a rope knotted around her neck. whatever warmth there was in ammit's eyes froze over
  • as if jettisoned into the vacuum of space.
  • ---In a single fluid motion she struck back at the men who had so defiled the woman
  • in that bed. she dropped the first man before anyone could blink, exploding
  • his lower jaw up into his face while the back of his head snapped back to
  • touch his vertebrae.
  • ---the next man met a slower end. seizing his neck while braced against his back,
  • she incrementally fractured every bone in his spine working from the bottom
  • up. the sickening crunch of bone helped to release a few grains of sand
  • from her desert of despair and vengeance. third man looked to be making a move
  • towards escape out the front door. ammit dropped the second man in a crippled pile.
  • ---"stop!" he cried. "i can give you whatever you want. i am heir to the most
  • powerful family in this city. please have mercy."
  • ---"you have nothing. but i will take everything that you have." she selected the
  • sharpest knife from the rack and placed the blade in the furnace of orange
  • coals. She grasped the glowing steel and straddled the man in a display of
  • power, not lust. "stop! you must stop! anything! i'll do anything!"
  • ---ammit's lips curled. "okay, big man. show me what you've got." snatched open his belt and
  • grabbed his genitalia. the blade hissed for but an instant, her act of justice
  • swift as lightning. she tossed the severed tissue into the stove and finished
  • cauterizing the flesh. his howls annoyed her so she seized him by the upper
  • jaw, and dragged him outside with the sharp points of her nails embedded
  • in his upper palate. she threw him down the stairs and then threw him into
  • the center of the cobbled street.
  • --ammit was tired of the violence and death, but that did not stop her from snapping both his knees
  • until they were bent ninety degrees in the wrong direction. she did his
  • elbows much in the same way, so that they could spin like the blades of a
  • windmill. and she pulverized every digit, carpel and vessel in his hands until
  • they were no more than a lumpy pulp within a glove of skin.
  • she used the paring knife which she stabbed into his tongue and roughly bifurcated
  • it, uncaring as to how much she cut or
  • didn't cut. the result was so repulsive that even she nearly had to turn away
  • from her handiwork-butchery. and in a last cruel gesture, she used the knife
  • to carve into his forehead a forbidden character from the language of hell,
  • denoting a class of demon so vile that even the devil's great halls of
  • suffering rejects them.
  • ---ammit returned to the apartment where she delivered a halfhearted
  • roundhouse to the man with the silly-straw spine, collapsing half his
  • skull in upon itself. she threw the corpses into the street, at last satisfied that she
  • could do no more justice upon these men and left them to rot.
  • ---she then went to attend the girl's dead mother, patiently taking the time to
  • wipe the woman with a warm cloth and dress her in a elegant, colorful garment
  • hanging in the closet.
  • ---finally, ammit carried the woman's body over the little girl so that she may offer her prayers
  •  
  • with final tears, ammit spirited away the little girl. away from her father's atrocity.

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • My love,
  • Why you crying? stop crying
  • open your eyes tears dry 'em and just tell me why
  • don't say you ok i know you lying sorry for prying
  • but you ain't gonna get help if you don't open up
  • cause if you don't tell for hell no one's ever gonna give a fuck
  • and maybe that's what you want
  • maybe you just want to severe the bonds you've made with your friends
  • cause maybe you can't say "save me" cause you're god damn stuck
  • in that hole you dug yourself digging deeper every day
  • don't stop digging you say dying to just slowly decay
  • doing everything you can to just dodge dying today
  • and no matter what I try you just won't disclose your ways.
  • But seriously. if you die you can't say "no one will miss me"
  • Cause you don't know your blow on the world
  • the twirl and swirl of the whirlwind you'll unfurl.
  • the grenade you're holding without the pin in
  • don't drop the lynch pin cause your sin can be forgiving again.
  • You're an idiot.
  • stubbornly, clumsily, living fine but then suddenly
  • you decided to do it, but don't give up at any cost
  • it is not a theory, nothing is impossible when it comes to getting what you want
  • you've made me realize my dream
  • my friend, impossible or not just do it.
  • that is the you that I know that will always plow through it
  •  
  • Alright back down you pulling and pushing
  • no pushing stop pulling im not just your cushion
  • I'm your friend, not just any friend its like you're pushing me to make it end
  • so stop. no pressure but get your shit together.
  • You can't just stay down forever.
  • Eventually you'll probably go to heaven
  • but if you die, you'll never again be my brethren
  • Cause you'll be dead, so fed up with your playing threads
  • cutting my guts open then sewing me up
  • fuck man, i just can't stop wasting my luck
  • you forcing me to say things I never meant to say
  • making promises I can't keep at the end of the day
  • just lay down and stay down just go to sleep
  • meep you say stop creeping and I say stop bleeding
  • stop hurting yourself it hurts me too my boo
  • the loo ain't a place for you, let me step in your shoes
  • cause I refuse to lose to your issues
  • from my point of view It's like you grew into blues
  • no excuse just tell me the truth about who you are
  • remove these facades and raise the bar
  • My friend you are just truly bizarre
  • you want help but you just cant voice it
  • time is ticking your life is slipping so just let me point it out
  •  
  • for fucks sake jesus christ must you make
  • my life so hard? bugging me hugging me I'm a pile of lard
  • Broken down no more crowns just endless sounds
  • of screaming and death I'm dying I'm bound
  • You pushed me past the limit I had
  • too bad so sad I'm extremely mad
  • cause holy shit you can't shut up
  • can't fuck off or even take a nap
  • just close your damn eyes and sleep tonight
  • fight the fight light the blight
  • just leave me alone don't drag me with you
  • your hole is too deep I'll throw you some tissues
  • I tried to pull you out but shit it's impossible
  • I'll dive and try my best but it's still improbable.

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