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This rap was deleted.DEFENDER'S RAP
- Alright, here’s a diss response to that rap:
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- Yo, I’m stepping to you, it’s time to set the record straight,
- Your bars are light as air, I’m bringing heavyweight,
- You talkin’ ‘bout the dark thoughts? Man, your rhymes are dim,
- I’m the night and day, you can’t even swim.
- Claiming you’re a Jake Paul, but you’re more like a wannabe,
- I’ll leave you in the shade, your light’s just a mockery,
- You talk about clapping cheeks? Bro, you need a lesson,
- Talk to your reflection, ‘cause that’s your only connection.
- You say you’re the black sheep, but you lack the fleece,
- When they count the real ones, you just don’t increase,
- All your shots miss, like you’re blindfolded in a fight,
- You think your raps are fire? Nah, you’re just a slight light.
- Keyboard warriors? Nah, we bring the action,
- While you’re stuck rehearsing lines, I’m the main attraction,
- You think you’re tough in Detroit, but you’re just a joke,
- I’ll outshine you in the city where the real ones evoke.
- Feeling like the nature boy? You wish, that’s a stretch,
- I'm the ultimate savage, and let me make this fetch,
- You talking about survival? You ain’t living right,
- You’re just a flickering candle, I’m a wildfire, ignite.
- You’re stepping to a rhyme master? That’s a real mistake,
- I’ll put you in the ground, call it ‘detroit’s latest quake,’
- So keep your bars tight, or step back from this fight,
- 'Cause my diss hits harder than your whole track, goodnight.