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bar sport (Slay Illsome) [might be edited, expanded]
- I write sometimes li̲ke I'm out for
- blood (I kind of have been &am)
- like vampires; tha[ɑ]t's for
- all the injustice &violence absorbed
- [video games, films, (&later) rap &politics related stuff]
- from this unjust &f#cked world
- you may think I'm a kettle boiling, 'cause
- writing rhymed texts &going hos—
- —tile in 'em is a way to blow steam off
- besI̲des that, I'm bored
- like a plank that I̲ would, o[ʌ]f course
- ["board"]
- not mind watching a bloody dumb war—
- —mongering, power drunk jerk
- walk off into the waters galore of hungry cro[ɑ]cs or
- sharks, though I̲ would o[ɑ]pt for something much worse
- if punishing power corrupted schmucks were
- up to mO̲I̲ with my warped
- mind; like a drama queen, or a jihadist fiend
- at a public spot with hO̲[ɑ]stile in—
- —tentions &a bomb, or a gun on him
- I'd make such a scene
- ["sin"]
- one tor—mentors would love to observe
- one worth grabbing some bloody po[ɑ]pcorn
- [like the one portrayed in "punishment of an autocrat"]
- psycho alert; the villainous fiend
- inside wants to join this lyrical binge
- give 'em bloody hell, dude
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- listen U̲p, you da[ɛ]mn fool
- this message is also for the trap rap playschool
- that you pU̲nk pertain to
- consider yourself LIA 'cA̲U̲se you're plain doomed
- [lost in action]
- like an aircrA̲ft which is about
- to crA̲sh into the ground (plane, doomed)
- call thI̲s sh#t maltreatment
- 'cause, like a wicked professor prone
- to domineering, I'ma teach you a lesson, hoe
- ["molltreatment"]
- 'cause in this lyric writing game, you
- are just a lame stewd'
- [stu(ew)dent]
- you better find some da[ɛ]mn tools
- the screws of mine are cray loose
- just like Deadpool's; memorize this name to
- call me by: Slay Illsome
- [Deadpool's real name is Wade Wilson]
- you're like pup: so bloody tame you
- should be called Lame Chillsome
- ["po[ɑ]p", in the sense of "pop music"]
- so inept that holding somebO̲[ɑ]dy's dra[ɛ]nk, you'd
- prob'ly wind up with the dra[ɛ]nk spilled, chump
- I'm an instiller of awe &distaste
- a thrill killer, nuts, A̲lthough well trained
- and I really love to slay noobs
- I'll be enjoying some thrilling, high octane tunes
- while you'll be stricken by the grave blues
- 'cause I'll have you feeling such a pain you
- are gon' wish it were Max 'stead of me &start to pray to
- ["Payne"; Max Payne, who mostly just guns down his targets]
- me to put you down like I̲'m the type slinging
- off at others; I'll I̲ce you by swinging
- my mo'f#cking blade through
- your neck like a batter, whereA̲fter I[ɑ]'ll pick
- up your nut &make use
- of it as a damn bA̲sketball, prick
- I'll chop you in parts, then bo[ɑ]x 'em, like a way to
- verbally tag an attrA̲ctive gal with
- a set of plumply shaped boobs
- ["buxom"]
- I'll have the box wrapped a la gifts
- and then get the remainders of you sE̲nt ta
- a replantation focused center
- (so much for something with the littlest of spite...)
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- like a substance a[ɑ]ddict
- tryna quit but quickly sliding ba[ɑ]ckwards
- one verse &I'm back to mY̲ bad ha[ɑ]bits
- [the prelude]
- of writing; life lethargic, bU̲t this art form
- is something I sure have go[ɑ]t a lust for
- which explains why
- I'm sO̲ de—voted to my stuff when it's getting laid, like
- a carnal co[ɑ]mmerce; lyrical self indulgence, much more
- than self indulgent "I̲'ve got" type twerps
- making unco[ɑ]mplicated trap
- as if there were something like a cavy that
- those diletta[ɑ]nti aim to catch
- like someO̲ne depraved, I have (what?)
- a ba[ɑ]wdy like urge in my mI̲nd when I verse
- like a tI̲ght fit guise worn by a gal with nice curves
- exercising, intention... of nailing rhyming
- ["in tension"]
- as if rhymes were lush girls
- the type to whom technical seduction comes first
- lyrics wise, which is why some of my works
- may be regarded as hot stuff
- like a heated iron flyi[—]ng to[—]ward
- the face of a tyrant like jerk
- with the bo[ɑ]ttom side forth; do this kind of stuff for
- fun &to maintain these mI̲nd skills I scored
- ["slay just to maintain some relish &killing skills"]
- which explains why I dub it "bar sport"
- [sport/fun of making bars]
- you trap rap hacks ou[ɑ]ght to ha[ɑ]ve your
- bars shA̲rp just like swords of samurais, for
- ["sharp" in the sense of "stylish"/"attractive"]
- as I̲'ve said afore, I'm O̲U̲t for blood, twerps
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- struck this "bar sport" writing up short
- ["bar sport (prelude)" followed by this one]
- on hope, wound up with a flood of thou[ɑ]ghts versed (wow)
- guess this writer's inner fire's no[ɑ]t burned... out
- like someone dO̲ne too much work
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