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A Review Of HotShitSpitter's Album"Liquid Swords"

  1. //Intro//
  2.  
  3. Hey guys, that one review guy here
  4. Today we're going to be reviewing HotShitSpitter's album
  5. Liquid Swords
  6. The description says
  7. My writtens to instrumentals of GZA's 1995 album Liquid Swords
  8. SO Let's get into it right
  9.  
  10. //Track 1: Liquid Swords//
  11.  
  12. Good intro track with great lyricism and wordplay
  13. Some awkward bars in here at times
  14. But overall, it's a great intro track with good writing
  15.  
  16. Overall: 8.4/10
  17.  
  18. //Track 2: Duel Of The Iron Mic (feat. Lil_Chip)//
  19.  
  20. A weaker track than Liquid Swords was my first thought after reading
  21. Weaker in all regards, lyricism, wordplay and more awkward bars
  22. The feature does well but also has he's awkward bars
  23. Overall not liking it as much as Liquid Swords
  24.  
  25. I'm thinking a: 7.4/10 is appropiate
  26.  
  27. //Track 3: Living In The World Today//
  28.  
  29. Stronger track than Duel Of The Iron Mic but still
  30. Meh at moments with the lyricism
  31. Great writing and rhyming still on here but still not on the level
  32. of Liquid Swords, but great track overall
  33.  
  34. I'm feeling a: 7.9/10
  35.  
  36. //Track 4: Gold//
  37.  
  38. A great track, a high point so far
  39. Really good lyricism and wordplay
  40. Love the meanings behind some bars on here
  41. The best track so far?, I don't think so but still a great track
  42.  
  43. Overall: 8.1/10
  44.  
  45. //Track 5: Cold World//
  46.  
  47. Good track, a drop off in quality to the previous tracks for sure
  48. But some rappers would be happy to have this track on their albums
  49. Still not HotShitSpitters best work in terms of lyricism, flow and wordplay
  50.  
  51. Still feeling a: 7/10 but not up to par
  52.  
  53. //Track 6: Labels(feat. Coindrop)
  54.  
  55. A step up from the previous track but not by much
  56. A lack of diverse flows, intricate lyricism and creativity
  57. Bring this track down, the feature doesn't help if anything
  58. He brings it down a bit with his lackluster lyricism and boring flow
  59.  
  60. Overall thinking: 7.3/10 is good
  61.  
  62. //Track 7: 4th Chamber//
  63.  
  64. The best track so far with the least amount of awkward bars
  65. The strongest lyricism and most diverse flows
  66. The flows could use some work but still not too bad
  67.  
  68. Thinking a: 8.8/10
  69.  
  70. //Track 8: Shadowboxin'//
  71.  
  72. Holy is it a good track, I love the lyricism
  73. The wordplay, the strong meanings behind the bars
  74. Everything combines to make the best track on this LP so far
  75. Still have an issue with the lackluster flows
  76.  
  77. Still a: 9/10 though
  78.  
  79. //Track 9: Killah Hills 10304(feat. Neo Arno)//
  80.  
  81. Great lyricism from both of them
  82. The best feature on the record so far
  83. Really enjoyed this track, some awkward rhymes and bars here and there
  84. Still a great read though despite the flaws, still the flows are boring
  85.  
  86. I'm feeling a: 8.5/10
  87.  
  88. //Track 10: Investigate Reports//
  89.  
  90. Pretty weak in all regards of lyricism, wordplay and flows
  91. It focuses on storytelling while letting everything else suffer
  92. As a result this track is pretty boring and a drop off in quality
  93.  
  94. I'm feeling a: 7.1/10
  95.  
  96. //Track 11: I Gotcha Back//
  97.  
  98. Another track that sacrifices everything else for storytelling
  99. Not as much as the previous track but it's still noticeable
  100. Good track though despite it's obvious and glaring flows
  101.  
  102. I'm thinking a: 7.6/10 is great
  103.  
  104. //Lyricism//
  105.  
  106. Great lyricism throughout, some parts are very weak
  107. Some parts are very strong but overall really enjoyed the lyricism
  108. Wordplay and punchlines are on point most of the time
  109. Overall good, great at moments
  110.  
  111. Overall a: 8.6/10
  112.  
  113. //Flows//
  114.  
  115. Most of them are boring and repetitive
  116. There is no difference between the flows
  117. They are all boring and just lack a change in them
  118. He could improve on them
  119.  
  120. Overall: 6.8/10
  121.  
  122. //Cohesion//
  123.  
  124. Very cohesive album, touching on similar topics throughout
  125. Nothing to say about the cohesion on this record
  126. It's a very cohesive LP
  127.  
  128. 8/10 in terms of cohesion
  129.  
  130. //Choruses//
  131.  
  132. There are no choruses
  133.  
  134. //Verses//
  135.  
  136. Great verses, some are pretty weak and the features don't often
  137. Drop their best verses ever on here, still pretty good
  138. Not very consistent though, that's the only issue I have with them
  139.  
  140. I'm feeling a: 8/10
  141.  
  142. //Final Thoughts//
  143.  
  144. The strong points for the LP are The lyricism and verses
  145. Basically the rhyming on here is great
  146. But the lack of diverse and different flows and delivery drop the level
  147. On the LP, don't see much in terms of features, often
  148. The features didn't give stand out verses and delivery
  149. Overall the inconsistency in the track list is evident with some tracks
  150. Being masterclasses in rap and some tracks being boring slug fests
  151.  
  152. //Score//
  153.  
  154. Overall I'm feeling a: 7.5/10 on this record

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