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- (Intro 4 bars before beat *Talking*
- Man ...I've BEEN to a war. I was in Afghanistan for a tour, it's not like the video games...You only have ONE LIFE...This is the story
- I was PATROLLIN' while we were ROLLIN' along a DIRT ROAD shittin' without a COMODE just 'shellin' LOADS AND...Sprayin' and Prayin' at any thing that moved RIGHT TO THE GRAVE MAN!
- You can call it a lie, but I was there, I have mental PICTURES, imagine a Nightmare where you kill your own wife or SISTER, just a bloody mary hari kari suicidal fairy taily telling spelling thoughts are dwelling UP OR DOWN "Shot on a RAILING"
- I took a hit to my LEG, I BEGGED "God let this be it" and then he BROKE BREAD I kept FIGHTIN I was FINE THEN and kept RUNNING I emptied more M4 mags than 20 REDNECKS DUCK HUNTIN! I aint no "STUNTMAN" This shit was REAL, I could FEEL the STEEL and lead goin' throw my leg and hit my vest like it was "Sex" and I was "APPEAL" (a peel) But I fired back, hit my mark, I'll NEVER FORGET, NEVER REGRET, Motherfucker, don't doubt me, I'm an American WAR VET!
- I have an official "body count" of two, unofficial might be TEN, but THEN it doesn't matter because you just want to protect the OTHER MEN! Stay on the right SIDE of the LINE or you DIE in a NIGHT in a FIGHT and catch a FLIGHT in a "LITTLE BOX WITH YOUR FLAG. ALRIGHT?"
- Take some advice if you join up, you WILL BE A HERO, but whats the point if you come back a ZERO since your body is dead in a bag and your family is out of GEAR YO? This ain't "American Sniper" but there is never a happy ending to war War is a Whore that can get KICKED out a DOOR without PAYMENT and go to the local STORE and buy a BOOK AND READ SOME MORE!
- I'm just freestylin' now, this shit wasn't pre written JUST SO MANY THOUGHTS FROM 2007 It's like I've been more than BULLET RIDDEN! My blood brother got it too, only he lost his LIFE, he had a kid and a WIFE and he died INSIDE a base "Protected? YEAH RIGHT!" it's all a FAT LIE! When you're dead, you "Died" Simple like that Then you leave your family to sit an cry.
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- TRUE STORY
- Search TRE FRANCESCO PORFIRIO (US AIRFORCE) By Brother (I wont give my real name here) but I am "E4 (SPC) PORFIRIO US ARMY) One Tour (Afghanistan) 2007.
- 100% Freestyle, no backspaces I WOULD LIKE TO MAKE A SONG ABOUT MY EXPERIENCE PLEASE HELP WITH SOME LINES, RHYMES, MULTI's and "hard hitters" and help me out! Not really a collab, but just if you feel like adding on and helping, that would be really cool of you! Thanks guys.
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