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The Girl I Last Loved
- T’was one of my better, bloomy days,
- When I met her in a gluey gloomy place;
- That’s fine, I thought, in any case,
- No place ever could match her grace.
- For her deep eyes: imagine a few Niles,
- Below the Nile ‘n who made those smiles?
- The gods didn’t know. Stalled my office files,
- And I stalked her for days. For miles.
- One day I can never forget,
- She was happy and looked so nice,
- For the first time,
- She looked up at me with a smiling face.
- I went to her and we talked
- She was so kind while we walked.
- We spoke often, and when we did,
- None of us knew how time passed.
- We became good friends,
- But this something inside me
- All I could think about was how
- To tell her the things I felt?
- I’d close my eyes and see,
- This someone I adore –she.
- A beautiful person, whole and sole,
- A pretty heart, a prettier soul.
- Her kind and gentle temperament,
- Her sweet angelic smiles.
- Her softly spoken sentiments,
- That reach across the miles.
- Her smile and laugh that sparkled with
- The softness of her sighs.
- The way her face lit up a room
- Those twinkle in her eyes.
- My soul search was done and over,
- And now she must simply know,
- Just how I feel about her,
- For with words I cannot show.
- So I searched the card displays,
- To find something that says,
- Just what was on my mind.
- I prayed, “Please God! Be kind.”
- That day, I jerked off the cover,
- I told her how much I loved her.
- She stood there silently and thought.
- She threw away the flowers I brought.
- That day…
- Whirlwinds blew, cyclones raged,
- No birds flew, they all were caged.
- Into dark blank nothingness, I gazed.
- In a matter of moments, I aged.
- Really, all of this really happened?
- No, it didn’t.
- But did it matter what really happened?
- No, it didn’t.
- Love was all that mattered,
- Yes, I was sad and shattered.
- But in her, my love found its voice,
- So no blames, she made her choice.
- My love for her I’ll take to my grave,
- And no, I’m not trying to be brave.
- Did I mention ever, when you think back,
- That I’ll love her only if she loves me back?
- It’s been nine soft years since,
- That love light upon me was cast.
- She was, will remain, and she is:
- My first love, and my last.
By Anonymous
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