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Wellplayed move (PArt 1)

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  3. I watch you when you smile
  4. I watch you when you cry
  5. Its okay dear I'm here.
  6. Were the words she ached to hear from someone
  7. lying in bed writhing in agony form all the heartache
  8. She wished to be loved for once
  9. No she dint wish for sex
  10. She was a christian you sick people.
  11. She wished to fly. NOT metaphorically ,literally.
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  13. As she lay there ,eyes closed exhausted from all the crying
  14. Sitting up coughing a little ,she moved over to her balcony
  15. The Heroin she injected earlier that evening, was probably working late
  16. Staring out into the universe below her feet, she pondered the dependencies
  17. Of living in a confusing materialistic world,
  18. where people claimed to not know
  19. The purpose of their racial and organic origins
  20. Yet they performed heinous acts of wars and pollution
  21. Excusing their foolish acts of harm and raised toasts
  22. To "find inner peace" and to "better democracies" ahead,
  23. Yuck ,she was disgusted with this world's
  24. Tomfoolery and suspended superficial ness,
  25. Where priests claimed to purify your soul under the name of a powerful unseen
  26. And yet they died to become the same microbes they were born with.
  27. How is it that such mortals claimed the higher levels of existence
  28. when they were most likely blinded by a most probable lie
  29. Our religion's resilience will outlive all others they say,
  30. Such Microbes never learnt their lessons well in primary school.
  31. Universes and galaxies outside their narrow buildup lies called life and religion
  32. Existed comparatively as anything we describe :large no huge
  33. no majestic, even doesn't even begin to cut their significance.
  34. Till this day and from before the time of big bang,
  35. Un explainable to their silly science.
  36. She smirks at the imagery of "humans" as Alien's lab rats a complete failure in their experiment 00ALIFE
  37. Somehow herself wasn't included in that experiment.
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  39. Liberating and humbling is what she felt with this knowledge,
  40. Yet ,why so Powerless that her knees gave away ?
  41. And why did she feel emptier than a frill cage made of hay
  42. down in her usual rave she was supposed to be with like minded people.
  43. Scratch that ,with souls that recognized her bursting energy
  44. As One with which their own resonated .
  45. Alas .All the energy theories and electromagnetic fields couldn't explain
  46. this gaping soul less hole in her guts tonight.
  47. or all the nights that were to come hopefully without the fright
  48. She felt every time the Sun went down behind the horizons
  49. and her darkness welled up around her with jaws so wide
  50. It made her self imposed strength fade away into nothing.
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  52. A gush of cold wind blew in and softly caressed her cheeks
  53. waving past her lustrous now short knit hair
  54. Landing hard on her dresser where she kept her little kit of makeup
  55. and that little trinket she pawned all those months earlier
  56. Fell thomp! on the steely unfeeling floor ,making her jump.
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  58. You silly thing, I almost forgot you were here.
  59. She said picking up her invertedcross and
  60. holding it to her chest as if to soothe herself the pain
  61. In the weeks she had brought the anti christ emblem
  62. Julie developed a sort of an unexplainable connection with it
  63. She began to feel and see strange things around her.
  64. At first she dismissed them as nothing but peculiar coincidences
  65. But then again, No ten ton bucket truck just overturned and stopped
  66. skidding right half an inch from your feet ,where your precious locket lied.
  67. She was left baffled and so was her small group of good friends.
  68. But she got over it more quickly than the time next time
  69. She'd end up being... being a bloody mess !
  70. With a butchers knife logged deep in her chest
  71. If she hadn't been busy trying to unfree her pant pocket
  72. from that stupid potruding metalhook of the bar table
  73. and would've landed herself in the middle of an ugly brawl between drunk fucks
  74. This indecent made her belief in the supernatural ignite though not quite revived
  75. The tables turned though ,
  76. When Her best friend returned with her lost locket
  77. just in time to find her holding a knife to her already bloody wrists.
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  79. She smiled at the bitter sweet
  80. Extremely miraculous experiences of the past months
  81. and wiped away the building tears,
  82. Believing them to be the signs of her weak former self.
  83. She sank down ,her bare back rubbing against the walls
  84. and wept silently fully .
  85. Earlier she slept like a good girl without a thought to worry her
  86. A year later she saw that girl no more.
  87. A woman now,
  88. though pure in the biblical sense she wasn't clean no more in her head.
  89. The cold wind blew in again ,making her shiver in her silky lingerie.
  90. Crossing her arms over to hug skin,
  91. An unspoken wish to be her former naive unburdened self
  92. When she wandered into the realm of her dreams she knew not...
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  94. A subtle grip of her shoulders and a velvety soothing voice in her ears
  95. "I watch you when you smile
  96. I watch you when you cry
  97. Its okay dear I'm here."
  98. Julie wakes up to find herself in her old bedroom,
  99. Dressed in her cotton nightgown and a handsome face right across her own
  100. Pretending to be asleep ,
  101. Putting a hand on his smooth chest she allows her manicured nails do the talking ,
  102. "Who are you?"
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