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You (Draft 4 - Almost complete)
- I don't know where to begin, my head's still spinning
- I knew that chances were slim, the lights were dim.
- Even demons warned me of me trippin.
- But yet I hopped the fence.
- I even dropped my friends, I got with the trends
- Tell me was it all pretend? The late night calls just shams?
- 2 in the chest, the harsh truth penetrated my vest
- Like did I just get shot from my cell?
- Cause I got put under that spell, that dick cupid is the definition of stealth
- You opened up my cell so I could be myself.
- Even the voices sayed farewell, told me to have it swell.
- Even my heart felt like it had no tear's in it as well.
- And even though you knew of the past, knew that I lived on scrap
- you didn't give a crap
- You'd still hit me up on snapchat
- Asking where my life was at //tell me do you dream of rap?
- And my snappy comebacks always made you laugh
- until one day the texts stopped coming back.
- Felt like a couple of quick jabs from something made out of a lab.
- So I came back writing and this is where I am at.
- My hearts aching, breaths fading, liver is past saving
- I am laying in my bed contemplating, seasons passing
- And all my friends dont see the bottles that make me Mr. Fantastic
- Truth be told I think this time its fatal, my minds not stable
- I am pistol whipping the pencil, trying to come up with some sense yo
- Maybe if I write something good you'll say hello?
- Whoever said that this life is mellow never experienced this type of melody
- The lovely feelings inside of the'e turned into debris
- Demons are giving out sympathy, I truthfully //must be //mentally insane
- Listen to what they whisper into my brain ''Yo Tim where the fuck you at!
- I got a bottle of Jack to take care of some of that slack
- And maybe later we can mix some other shit to get you back on track.''
- Even though I wanna stay strong, you are no longer part of my song
- I dont know where I went wrong, maybe you and I never truly belonged.
- Maybe I just wanted to heal this broken heart without using a bong
- There is no sense left of dawn, my souls black and torn apart with a baton
- And I know its all over now
- I just want to lay in my bed
- With no sounds around
- With a bottle of vodka and just drown my doubt
- I can only wonder how life would have turned out with you around
- We were bonded, pound for pound. Majestic as paramount
- But both drowned in doubt. You mouthed some shit. While I coughed up some shit
- You decided to browse the crowd. While I bounced up and down.
- And I don't mean down to town
- I mean like a fucking mental meltdown
- No road to follow just me and this empty bottle.
- A rebel without a cause, thats now my motto
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