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DJ Dimes - Haters (Freestyle)
- Uh....
- I might need a recording soon, aight?
- Verse 1:
- A couple years ago I was a nerd, tried to fit in with the herd yet treated like a turd.
- I was just a bird, a bird that couldn't fly. Around those times all I wanted to do was die.
- I'm like why? They're just people... Yeah, but they were equal, and I was the high end of the totem pole
- I tried to stay hold, told myself one day I would win gold.
- Medals, medals only and people call me phony.
- Couple years ago I was scrawny, bony.
- Couple years ago I was lonely.
- I was a loner.....
- Felt like a stoner, sittin' up in my room... wonderin' what to do next, am I doomed?
- let's go back to fifth grade.
- Start of the school year i thought I had it made...
- I made a couple friends then on top got betrayed...
- I had glasses that looked like harry potter..
- I compared myself to other kids and asked girls "Who's Hotter?"
- But it's not about looks, it's about brains, wits, talent...
- Like an artist, I had the palette. I was 10 years old around that time, I started rappin'.
- Learned things from other people, I was a follower and I started trappin'.
- I started trappin' until I got mapped. I thought people would help me I thought I had it mapped..
- But as it turns out people turned on me.
- Time to get back to reality, we gon' see...
- Back then I had no money, maybe a couple pennies, nickels and dimes.
- I was only ten, yet those were hard times
- blow the wind chimes, ring the bell.
- Meet me in the bathroom to fight, I won't tell...
- Lied too damn much thought I'd go to hell..
- I was too confident, thought I ran the world till I fell......
- Verse 2:
- Sixth grade had the same glasses
- I thought i was tough, but in reality I was softer than molasses
- I matured mentally, thought little kids were asses
- Missed class a lot, needed lots of passes...
- Needed more passes than I needed money.
- Tried to act cool yet people thought I wasn't funny...
- There were some girls that thought I was as sweet as honey..
- But I wasn't tryin' to be....
- I was tryin' to be independent
- Leave me alone, I said it.
- Thought I wouldn't regret it.
- People told me fuck them, let it.
- let it go, I said fuck no, hoe.
- Oh I forgot, i don't give a fuck bout no bitch or a thot.
- I was on my own too damn much thought I would rot.
- But then I didn't rot, yet I survived.
- Come field day I was alive.
- I was runnin' with the hive, ready to jive.
- Do my own thing and run free.
- But somethin' happened on the last day, you see.
- Got into a fight over silly shit, nobody believed me.
- Come seventh grade this one nigga said I hit on girls.
- I said, fuck no, not in this world.
- Or at least, not for no reason.
- Couple months later I was ready for basketball season... and I trained all month and all day on my court.
- I was only 5'4" I felt pretty short.
- I was doing good till i went into a drought.
- Thought I would make it but i got kicked out.
- Went home feelin' kind of sad.
- I just lifted my head up and felt kind of glad.
- From now on I would work everyday, I said.
- After that I turned on a movie and went to bed...
- Now I work hard every day.
- I'm acting serious I don't even play.
- I don't give two fucks about no hater..
- Come in my face, all i say is see you later...
- They think I'm crazy, daisy, they think I'm a fake Jay Z
- But They say when I freestyle I don't make sense
- I do make sense bitch, sit on the fence.
- You just aren't intelligent enough to understand my rhymes.
- For example, a few hours ago this nigga was makin fun of my name, DJ Dimes.
- They laughed at it, and i grimaced.
- I said I just got started bitch, I ain't finished.....
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