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Still Standing/CarlCee Battle
- Start at 0:10 or ignore the beat and see me rip this kid below the "song"
- I feel like I'm just lost n' tossin an turnin, frosted over still burnin'
- yearnin for somethin greater, soul searchin in this dull hole full a haters
- An indicator that this world is not what it seems, not for me, vision blurred
- Stings cause it had the nerve to splice my last nerve, wow,
- Twice now I've sunk to the bottom *kerplunk* the sound of my rottin body droppin
- Used all the strength I've got n', stuck watchin, plottin my next move
- findin my groove, time to choose what path to take, what I have at stake
- you do the math while I sit here and fuckin masturbate,
- while everyone fucking laughs at the raps I make,
- wake n' bake, for god's sake hoping this is all a dream
- that it's not fake, and tomorrow instead of drowning in my sorrows I gleam
- And get a chance with these rap rants in my hands to redeem my torn self esteem
- I'll then be reborn livin vivid in the chants of my fans,
- Dancin, dashin, prancin, and laughin cause my plans aren't chrashin
- I can finally make a statement about our mental fashion without receivin a verbal lashin
- Babblin in my journal I finally ain't travelin this fucking circle, no longer feelin hurtful
- Dealin with fright in a bright light like I'm nocturnal,
- rarely seein, barely breathin turning purple,
- But I'm still standin...
- I'm still standin...
- Still standin...
- Still standing with my feet firmly planted,
- Granted I was never fully stranded,
- I'll never understand why I felt so abandoned
- My childhood wasn't bland n' I'll tell you firsthand
- I wasn't raised a dumb little ass though,
- branded a son of middle class folk,
- wrote, spoke like a normal human, still perceived different
- Maybe I'm late bloomin, a newly received shipment
- concealin a brilliant bewitchment feelin resistant
- Wonderin why everyone's so persistent thunderin in telling me what to do,
- what to say, who knew, I'd still be standing here today
- I almost ended it all, I almost fuckin hung a rope n' let all 150 pounds fall
- Jesus what a fucking close call,
- I don't give a lil shit if no one believes this ill spit raw
- Cause in the long haul you'll remember these lyrical pictures I draw
- An ember burned right through the center of the spherical sinners thought
- Just be careful when you're caught standing at the edge in distraught
- Remember you're lucky to be standin at all
- Remember we're still standin...
- We're still standin...
- Still standin...
- You're raps are bare there's nothin there, real rhymes are rare
- ill lyrically rip you apart like a fuckin nose hair,
- I make art while your shits rusty soundin worse than a dusty fart
- Bitch do not start
- my rhymes eat up your lines like a fuckin pop tart
- Ill pop you as a lead dart
- Leave ya dead like a stopped heart
- Till you can't breathe cause this shits a breeze, it's easy to me,
- believe what you see, a REAL MC
- I don't make fake shitty one syllable raps,
- in fact you're as killable as drugged up lab rat,
- you ain't a thug just a crushed bug on my windshield on the road to fame,
- Benny FUCKING Trip remember the name,
- As it slips through your toneless lips borderline homeless,
- and who's to blame?ME. ive got more skill purely in my pinky finger,
- merely lettin the scent from your stinky raps linger,
- so sit in fasten up an listen while I give it to you rough,
- Then delete, I REPEAT, Delete your raps and beats ya fuckin clown,
- I ain't joking around when I say you've been SHUTDOWN
- You're raging an got some grammar issues go back to first grade
- I'll be bathing in glamor and diss you till you burst in pain
- wait, no, that's just that lava you said while bitchin
- I'm afraid, though, yo mama is givin me head with a smile in the kitchin
- See that's what we genius rappers call skill,
- I'm ill, sick of lil penis fappers takin notes from Kill Bill
- But this ain't at all a movie more like World War II
- You're playin Call of Duty four while I hurl on you
- I'm not spittin, just shittin on everything you write,
- So listen freak, I might just speak and cut you some slack, ight?
- I know you're weak an secretly tweakin countin petals knowin you gonna lose
- Prick, that's why you choose an pick on low levels like a dick in a pussy that's too loose
- Metaphors son, I'm guessin you didn't know they exist
- That's why I'm givin you a rap lesson so don't get pissed
- Level 10 and you ain't even on my hit list,
- It's a sin for me to win cause I could crush you with a fist made outta fuckin mist
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