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When the Music Stops (Remix) Feat. Theory, Elijah, and Tomob
- ((Verse starts at 0:32))
- //Surv\\
- I'm gettin' real sick and tired of the shit thats getting recognition in the rap game/
- Most of rap is lame/ But my raps you cannot contain/ My shit is insane/
- Many raps are inane/ I can't even understand what alot of rappers are saying/
- I want a rap game thats not a bunch of junkies and school flunkies/
- I want a rap game thats not a bunch of dumbasses, do ya see?/
- I flow sharp like a samurai sword/ March to the beat like a zombie horde/
- I deliver punch lines like pizza/ Feel the pain in my storytelling, ask for anesthesia/
- ((1:00))
- Listen, if you think I'll fall off and lose the game,
- The minute I fall off, I'll be homeless, drinking booze in an alleway getting flooded
- from rain.
- The day I stop, will be a day full of pain.
- Not just for me, but for everyone, my family, my friends will feel bad for the
- fortune that had been dumped down the drain.
- I've seen so much plagiarized shit on RapPad, I can't get through it,
- Like that little freakin' pussy, Cam fucking Lewis.
- I feel like a caged demon, who at any second can stop a big rapper from breathin
- Somewhere in my life I know I'll have to resort to stealin'
- I know I'm keeping in my sorrow for the day they say whey the say "Surv fell."
- I feel like I'm destined to hell, motherfucker you think you can sell?
- Well then, bitch, lets see how well,
- When the music stops!
- //Tomob\\
- If i were to reside over the hip hop kingdom would I
- stay at peace in my mind or begin to find that the greed and envy is intertwined
- looking for the remedy still but I cant find
- I cant turn the switch off im sick of gucci mane and rick ross
- I'm pissed off and I'm jumping around like criss cross
- at all these little rip offs who begin to shit talk
- but don't ever spit raw while my head filled with sick thoughts
- I dread leaving my own door
- when night creeps in is when I seek my pen
- I might begin with some sick rhymes then
- but I cant stop when the light begins
- I lost my mind and everyone of my friends
- as the beat plays and the record spins
- I lift the heat take a second and lift it to my head
- press it to my temple I'm about to be a dead dude
- when i hear the loud bang pop..I fade to grey and feel myself drop
- and finally I reach the time,
- When the music stops!
- //Elijahrko\\
- Call the cops
- And dead they'll drop
- I'm like Eminem the cream of the crop
- I walk so hard I piss the ground off and shake the blacktop
- Thats when the music stops
- This ain't B rabbit
- I wish I had a habit
- Of getting things into the basket
- Now this shit is turning to a habit
- I need to grab it and snap it
- When the music stops
- You regin comes to an end now
- That road I been down
- My shit comes out the color brown
- Put him in a chock hold and let the little bitch drown
- Now lets turn that frown upsides down
- Slap you in the face with abag of rice
- I never play nice
- I grab you by your tail and shake you once or twice
- You squeak like a thousand mice
- My rhymes are precise
- Not overpriced
- I had to sacrifice to live in paradise,
- When the music finally stops!
- //Theory\\
- The flow is quite on schedule like tangible planners
- insanity's here, I stand and the stands and the fans, goddamit
- they clap and applaud, go bananas as Hannah Montana
- brandishing a wall and handling a few grams of cannabis strands
- hands in the air, leave you panicking, you get frantic
- when I jam it like unwashed Tec 9's, I'm causing damage
- to the whole damn planet, and slam this beat into the granite
- I get cream like I'm the man of the year, rappers vanish
- like black women in Vanity Fair, the flow spazzes, get manic
- an artist like Michelangelo at his canvas
- throw your hands in the air, or lyrically you get banished
- because I rock the jams by popular demand, the track? I ran it
- murder the mic around the South whether I'm out in Atlanta
- or Alabama where the meth hit connect drug scramblers
- or in my hometown in Louisiana, I'm on the channels
- because I found a way to take my rage and anger and channel it
- gamblers and handlers cock hammers, spoon fed propaganda
- cops lock the slammer, spread the word like a cancer
- paparazzi cameras and glitz and glamour, it doesn't matter
- in the ghetto where all they want is some dollars and answers
- animals brandish gats and knives, hunt like Doctor Banner
- zoning off and smoking tons of Rollie blunts with lots of gamma
- you can't relax and vibe, I be like Monch and drop the grammar
- I just take it, beat it, like I be the Jackson 5, Charles Manson
- of this rap shit, got the hottest stanzas, colder than Canada
- plus the rifle stand tall like France, holding artists for ransom
- dropping so many names in disses, The Game reported slander
- smoking coriander strands and I jam
- then the music stops
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