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The Us Of Society
- Society pushes us
- Until we want to scream
- But Society,
- Is made of us,
- People.
- Some up high
- In the Forbes list
- Some middle class
- Living from paycheck to paycheck
- And to the bottom
- The ones called scum and worthless
- Because they’re left penniless and defenseless
- And I bet some of you are already angry, ashamed, or heartbroken
- And some maybe, confused
- But, look that's life
- And that's not all
- I admit it,
- All people fall
- If you’re in your car
- Look out your window
- What do you see?...
- I bet you see, a sign
- That says, “Homeless. Anything helps. God Bless”.
- Let me guess?!
- Did you pass him by, even as he pressed a “poverty stricken” hand against the glass??
- Okay, now look to your right,
- Yes, next to the liquor store
- Do you see that woman?
- The women scrapping across the dirty concrete
- Looking for leftover cigarette buds?
- Yes, well guess?
- She’s looking for buds for a temporary bliss to feed her addiction
- She left home early at the raw age of sixteen
- Because she thought,
- Her parents were wrong, because,
- She thought she had a love worth saving
- Ten years later she’s filing for divorce and physical abuse
- She’s left with more than physical bruises and scars
- So she tries to mend her wounds,
- She goes to the clubs, she sleeps around, she drinks, she smokes
- Does this for an endless cycle for another ten years
- Everyone else looks at her with disgust
- Telling the 40 year old, to grow up
- But, then she remembers she needs a man
- A man to pay for her drinks, her buds, her jobs,
- For her needs and her wants
- Oh look→ Here he comes,
- Coming out of the liquor store
- With his pants hung low,
- And a case of beers in his arms
- And she’s back where she started
- But, it’s not her fault.
- I mean not really
- It’s none of their faults
- We all hurt
- And we’re all evil
- Call me cold or a liar
- But tell me
- What would you do?
- When a friend leaves you alone at a party
- In a dark room,
- Drunk, cold, vulnerable
- A kickback full of hormones and drunk, loose boys
- Next thing you know
- You isolate yourself
- From your friends, your family,
- You’re depressed and secretive
- You let no one know
- What happened that night
- And why the sudden change
- You’re ashamed
- Now, turn the page
- Do you see that 9 5 waitress?
- Yes, the one serving the tuxedoed white men
- Yes, the dudes who stop by every day in their classic Mercedes
- The ones who are CEO’s of their own company
- Yes, that women
- She goes to work from 9 5
- Maybe even longer
- Because she’s got two boys to feed and wake up
- And she’s got no time for heels and makeup
- That’s the lifestyle for this single mother
- Who’s got no time to dress up
- So she deals with the men every day
- As they call her slow and stupid
- But she kisses their asses
- Knowing she lives of their tips
- Swallowing her pride for her kids
- Okay now look at the road in front of you
- Do you see those two teens in the alleys behind the block?
- Well, they’re smoking weed
- Because no ones told them any better
- Just left them home with a babysitter
- I don’t care what you say
- It comes down to the parents
- Bad or good
- They need to learn discipline
- Because in 4 years
- Instead of new sneaks
- Straight out of high school
- They’re into a brand new pair of cuffs
- Behind bars
- For what?
- No new sneaks, car, or degree
- They’re stuck with a sentence for life
- But look….
- Remember the homeless man and his sign?
- Yes?
- Well, someone helped him out
- Not you, not me, maybe him or her
- But because of that one person
- He picked himself up with some help
- And now, he’s got a minimum wage job
- He’s dressed nice and clean
- He’s more than grateful to be,
- Second class
- Remember the woman?
- Abused and addicted?
- Well, guess.
- After two lines on a test and the birth to her first child
- She took him away from the abuse
- Deciding that she could handle the pain
- But she’d never ever let her child do the same
- Never too late
- She went back home to long awaiting arms
- Wide open
- That same home she left at sixteen
- Now, she’s finally home and loved
- And loving her new bundle of hope
- Tied the rope
- To a new husband
- Knowing this time he was the one
- Wondering about her addiction?
- Guess what?
- She’s been cold turkey two years now
- Yep, been going to sessions since
- Remember that teen girl alone at the rager?
- Well, it took her a while
- But, she finally spoke out
- Opened up and cried to her family about what happened
- She followed through and filed a case report
- She’s free to say he’s now behind bars
- And she found out she’s not the only one
- Who fought the same thing alone
- Now, she holds her head proud
- Running campaigns to support her fellow women
- Who went through what she did
- And it took her a while
- But, she found a man she trusted
- And loved his touch
- Remember that 9 5 waitress?
- Did I mention she’s an immigrant
- Yes, she dealt with it all
- From racism, to favoritism,
- To social Darwinism
- Well, her work paid off
- One son went to college
- Another straight into climbing the rank of marine
- Thanks to her work
- They bless her
- And provide for her in return
- Her marine son gifted her
- A chance of a certified citizenship
- The other a house and a new car
- And of course,
- it’s a classic modern Mercedes
- From all these years
- As a single mom
- It paid off
- Her back might be old
- From those years of hard labor
- But, she never sold her soul
- And never gave up
- After it all
- It was worth all her love
- My point is Society and Life might break us
- But that's all up to us
- Let it break us or make us
- None of us are worthless or hopeless
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