Listened to Jay Z now I'm hungry...
• Written by Greatdakingslayer
Greatdakingslayer's Notes
This rap goes hard from the get go. It is essential to start rapping when it gains a bit of intensity due to my style's naturality. Also, I suggest you look deeper to the content, such as the line "the train's coming" with its relation to the horn type of sound the instrumental starts out with. Look for the metaphors, similes, personification, etc.
//Careful children as I express my thoughts the train is coming
//(Verse starts at 0:32)
My spit hits so hard cause it's powered by Viagra
What comes out explodes so far, and flows just like Niagara
Too enormous of a scale for you ignoramus in jail
Stuck in a box switch your flows up
Cause your next show's up if you sound monotonous might as well not show up
Tell your creativity, to grow up cause it's running fuel on the low
Unlike Great on TV, for jewel running 'n' gunning on the road
Bullet holes made on the body of the opposition
My candle is too lit, "ohh"s I hear from everybody in the competition
Vocabulary complexity broken down into simplicity
I'm always ready to tone down for every fan in this city
Rhyming density, let's see if it has the blueprint visibility
Timing actively, but I sound like I'm rapping recklessly
Spitting Asian with the stereotype, I'm always told to "Wreck less Lee"
Usually lazy but energized when I hear speak who I aspire to be
Every time I hear from Jay Z I'm inspired to spit shit that's crazy
Every line goes so hard on my previous avatar I was sitting on row rocks
Top right corner, check out the cover art
My latest one portrays my mind expression, as water fountain shows explosion
As I unloaded empty my AK-40, this rap's reached the conclusion
With that said, this record's been brought to its closure
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About the Artist
Greatdakingslayer
Member since September 28 2013