Open Blinds
• Written by Chonk
Chonk's Notes
This Rap I made was for my annual poetry fest which I had rapped before in the year prior but I choked hard when I was 17 and spent about 7 months just writing these 2 verses haha. I was always occupied. But I wanted to come back strong with a nice ass rap and i spit in front of the school crowd to kill that shit. Fuck with me
(Verse 1)
Alright
So Im back up here again on the mic
took me a while to decide if i wanted to freestyle or write
then i decided over night id free my mind in despite
Imma' get my message out there to you guys & thats why I write
-Okay so, Lets get going now I cant waste my time
even though i want to-, rap ever line, & spit every rhyme
Imma need to- hold off the shine and pull up the blinds
I need everyone to see or get this message of mine
So I guess I need to get a little personal now
So I can have yall hear me out instead of listening how
I can- rap so beautifully upon such a crowd
hopefully my homies hear it so they can be proud
----- but back in the day when this was never allowed
I would sit in my room alone with my thoughts in the clouds
All that thinking got me feeling with my throat in a drought
Becoming rich and famous, something Id always doubt-----
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(Verse 2)
But now I sit here smarter older and wise-
something i didn't understand but i finally revise-
self-fulfilling Prophecy- Planning our own demise
usually tends to hold a lot of us back in our lives you feel me?
let past stick in yah like foregoing knives you feel me?
living a young adult life- need to recognize you feel me?
Instead, you live in a world where you stress and agonize you feel me?
And feel that all the words your told are all just lies- but let me
tell you right now as clouds fly through the sky
thinking too much will cause your days to just fly on by
teenagers- lost in the world they always asking me why
then I tell em'- follow your heart it wouldn't be there otherwise
cause,--- without a heart its too dark to see tomorrow
don't want to live a life being insane with pain & sorrow
But--- As I say always learn with you eyes
-- You're developing who you are-until the day that you die
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Chonk
Member since January 10 2015