When I make it

• Written by  • Featuring tomob and Obscure

Ladies..Gentlemen...will you please take a seat?
Shortly we will see your collaborators of the night
*curtain opening effecting*
 
(Erudite)
Welcome to my presentation showcasing my innovation
Of when I make it get an ovation drinking shots up in the celebration
Celebrating but that party style just ain't for me
Eastside of the states but preaching unity
Trying to be best I can be for the whole community
But I'm cold brutally mutually wishing away cruelty
I'm a loving caring individual, cynical but when it's critical
Move when it's pivotal up into my pinnacle and claim residuals
So when I make it, take off in a space ship, out this place with
no doubt never to return to a basement, or unto any laced shit
Already walked miles in these shoes, that's why I'm not confused
With mis-skewered views but the rhythm still playing blues
Looking for clues to fuse with my muse nothing left to lose
So when my dues catch fumes i choose to
live a luxurious life but I'm the curious type
made a furious hype now I passing Obscure the mic
 
(Obscure)
When I make it, I'm gonna change my city
Help out homeless on I-75, make sure they never skinny
Restore it back to its former glory, like back in fifties
Tour round my town, I made it, I'm renown
I hope mommy and daddy can say that they are proud
Of their disappointment son who they avoided
Love flushed down the toilet when they sent me for deployment
Voyaged to the top, philosophy made me a prodigy
Ferocity, there's no stopping me, you can't change the prophesy
Policy was determination, put in work and dedication
Obligation was to top the game without hesitation
Escalate to great heights, Mount Everest elevation
Reputation built up it never saturates
Elaborate my knowledge, with Erudite on the collaborate
We don't settle for mediocre we set out to fascinate
Accelerate on this track, won't stop til I'm at the pearly gates
 
(tomob)
Attempts to generate extra hate to instigate
A state of hate and rage against my name
Only creates a stage for me to rhyme in flames
Disperse with fakes
Immersed with greats
Slay those who regurgitate and imitate
What they didn't make
Scaled mountain peaks they said I couldn't reach
Achieved feats of unique intrigue abeast who defies belief
Cyphers with heat a titan of beats
Constructing lyrics with lines in a league
Of complexity of its own galaxy
Appreciate the collaboration thanks for having me

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Erudite
Member since August 25 2014

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