Unfinished '20
• Written by Claaansey
Claaansey's Notes
unfinished piece I made 2 years ago, looking for feedback on it/if I should complete it?
//verse 1 0:30
look over my shoulder, is that him? like it had to be
One day I strive to be the father that mine lacked to be
they mad at me, turning my life to a catastrophe
it's sad to see success from motherfuckers that were bad to me
man, left me mad confused
spending half my life I'm getting mad abused
with these abandoned views, i'm feeling mad and used
then he wonder what put me on the path to Booz
spending half my days playing Minecraft in the basement
its like somehow I just knew that half my life was being wasted
I mean, lets face it, living off a lung i'm on the pavement
like the hospitals a bitch, but I still wait for a replacement
BC forest fires, but I get the fire from the forest
I be spitting bars about my life, but it seems like no one notice
losing focus,
like hocus Pocus, i'm becoming broke-us
living life on the street thanks to this fatherly bogus
sometimes i'm Japanese with the ying to the yang
I still struggle to find what brings the pain
if I could think straight just to ease my brain
i'm like 2 pac with 3 takes and free champagne
I just wanna be a man again
i'm stuck inside a mannequin
I reminice, i'm panicking
'i'm fine' I say 'extravagant'
i'm mad again
'you're nothing man, like you ain't even talented'
i'm shy because their lies get to my mind,
i'm falling back again
im falling, im tripping
I put myself in a place where it's clogging, my vision
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Claaansey
Member since January 21 2018