The Storyline (Single Verse)

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R_L_Jr's Notes

This some kind of storyline classic feeling rap instrumental that got a calm percussion to it. So I went on with this.

I'm rappin' like this cause I'm feelin' up to it
You trappin' like that cause you reelin' back to it
I can make the rhymes, but I let the track do it
Cause my oh my I start get that mac fluid
I can do attacks, but my shit is lackin' lucid
Rhymes, about half the time, that I write my lines
I'm fine, but I want to have the better punchlines
Seems my career just starting to unwind
I was blind in the past an' I couldn't do mine
'Cause I was mindin' the cast for the crowd, in a bind
For their critics and their judgin' thought that I was gonna sign
Had to stop myself quick before I ran out of time
So I found RapPad and found a new storyline
Made some lyrics had no critics but it was for me time
Passed by then I started wonderin' why my rhymes
Wasn't noticed, then I focused on other fly rhymes
Then I read about Fish in the meantime
Started to feel the shit cause it was flowing with some mean lines
Wanted to do something like it but I noticed I was gettin' blind
Out the right state of mind cause he was on some mega lines
Then I went on to write lyrics stuck into that writer's block
Man that shit had broke my spirit but I couldn't ever stop
Because I knew I looked up to something real on the drop
Had to put it out there and try to get off the top
I was a Tony Montana all the way back then
Always praisin' myself like I was playing pretend
But then, things come to an end, like that mega trend
After that I made a friend, I can always commend

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