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Rap is slowly forgetting it's meaning

It started soley talking about regretting or demeaning

When new people are only phoney they need redeeming

Writing is difficult scheming screaming teaming screaming

Writing is sufficiently tricky when you don't have a demon

Feasting at your mind efficiently thinking of beatings reaping you

don't just let those thoughts stay creeping put them to word

Then give them a great meaning

don't keep emotions inside just because your grieving

First let's start with keeping getting feedback

Don't drawback that would be a setback

Keep your own sound so here's a recap might be from the rebound

Or resound make your self embraced and drowned

Make your lyrics worth great pound for pound, mabey less profound

Lady if your getting off track bring around your common ground

Never give up just at least stick around

It might be dangerous to create your very own trend

Friends are courageous to help you through the end

Get help from people with experience

Then make your steeple piece of brilliance