First Night back

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Mukrat's Notes

Just to show a bit of my style for feedback

Why'd I come back to the panel to dabble in rhyming
Inviting the silence of night, it's a maddening guidance
And I have been trying to deny it's unbinding confinement
But I have decided
So long as my mind keeps surprising my focus
With piles and piles of lines all unspoken
That I just might try to revise them, and so this
Is why I have finally sat down to write me a roguish
But so uncontrollable poem with flow that will below to no one
 
Except not tonight because I've grown quite tired
But give me some feedback
And maybe a sign that you like it, if you so desire

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Mukrat
Member since September 18 2014

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