Taking Control (Kendrick Lamar D...
• Written by JoshCarroll323
JoshCarroll323's Notes
This is over Kendrick's verse of Control (starts at 2:42, but it is not recorded). I did this after hearing Kendrick say he was the king of New York. I had to go all out on this remix.
//Intro:
Miscellaneous minds are never explaining their minds
They never can figure out how I'm atop of this game and that I kill shit everyday on a mic and they'll soon realize I'm not gonna ever demise
(I don't just rap, motherfucker I kill it)
Bitch, everything I rhyme is a cornerstone to my legacy
If you ever feel down, just lay back and slip in my disc
Don't you show me no fucking fist, imma stand up and fist you this
//Verse:
Tell my bros to drop some bombs on this shit
Dropping rhymes like atomics, go kamikaze on this shit
But if this was a world war, I'd defeat every enemy doing this shit
I've got a mouth that lyrically murders with every rhyme it spits
I'm going HAM on this track, I ain't slowing down
I've already been named king, please hand me my crown
Cause when all is said and done, I will have ruled this game
The other MCs will be schooled once they hear my name
I'm a juggernaut to my haters, blending in like I'm one of them
But when they try and talk to me, I'm bonding with none of them
I'm living my own life, no need to interfere
But, if you do, me and my crew will have you trembling with fear
I do this shit for fun, but I still gain attention
If you see me rhyming, then you better make mention
I'm a go-getter like Speed Racer on his Mach 6
Y'all players just sit on your fucking couches and eat Trix
Silly rabbits, this game is for men
If you wanna succeed, you better go hard with paper and pen
My mind is so complex, no one dares to read it
You fuck with me, like Michael Jackson, I'll tell you beat it
A lot people seem to be brooding like Boobie Miles
Why you chasing the dream when you can't even run the mile?
Might as well just give up, you can't compete with my style
You'll end up being burned to death since my raps are so vile
Hey Kendrick, the last three lines go for you
You were mentored by Dre, was he the only one there for you?
Matter fact, where's your last name rap bastard
You got 2 first names, maybe you were named backwards
And how can you say you're a Muslim on pork
I bet the Arabics already mobbed you with pitchforks
Cause you're not even a Muslim, get your mind out the gutter
You say that shit again, they oughta churn you with butter
(I don't just rap, motherfucker I kill it)
On all the raps I've killed, you're the only one getting dissed
And on you I'll take a piss, you'll never fight back
Nia Long rejected a hug, were you looking at her rack?
It seems that you'll never ever win in this game
When you already claiming King of New York at an early age
This is the impetus for my infinite rage
It's the end of the line for you, this is the last page
I'm the best when it comes to murdering rhymes
You can try and top me, but you're running out of time
I just murdered you on this track like I turned into James Bond
You'll end up a little fish in a big-ass pond
I'm the leader of the pack now, you've been downgraded
My career is soaring while yours is slowly fading
I beat the shit out this beat, I was in my zone
And after this, I will have overtook your motherfucking throne
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Member since April 17 2014