I Wish You Were Here (My First Rap)
• Written by TheShinyKeldeo
TheShinyKeldeo's Notes
For those of you who see this rap, I would ask you to rap it at the pace of the song and tell me how it sounds so far. Your opinion helps out, folks! And if you wanna know what this rap is about, it's basically a guy that remembers his close friend and wishes that he was still around.
Alright, now listen right here, this rap is what was
We said we didn’t like me, I was afraid of us.
You raised me, amazed me, praised me cuz.
I asked you who's the raddest, and the answer was.
We met me in a shelter, waiting for a bus.
We didn't even argue, didn't even fuss.
We had a few laughs, and that's just 'cause.
We got along better then the bees that buzz.
I still remember times when you were having trouble.
I couldn't stand there, bro, and see ya just struggle.
At first when I looked at you, ya looked like a puzzle.
Then I gave ya words, you gave back a couple.
When you spoke to me, fam, you sounded so subtle.
When you helped me out, you were always so humble.
You were like a friend, man, you were like a double.
If it won't for you, well, I'd still be thinking bubbles.
Whenever either one of us got scared by some thunder,
We'd stick with one another like we were each other's brother.
You were always such a friend, we would always show our colors
I felt you were better than the world's Seven Wonders.
Your people were so nice, it was like we shared mothers.
Your people were so nice, they were nicer than the others.
When we hung out one day, we'd hang out on another.
And all because of you, man, I'd have the best summers.
But now that you are gone, I feel I'm out of luck.
Every time I think, man, I'm always getting stuck.
I wish that you were here, man, 'cause trouble runs amok.
I wish that you were here, 'cause you're better than this schmuck.
He'd always make me feel bad, he'd make me feel struck.
And compared to you, bro, this guy just sucks.
I wish you were here, 'cause he's not even worth a buck.
I wish you were here, man, so I could feel starstruck.
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TheShinyKeldeo
Member since January 5 2017