Reflections Ft. RickGrimesIsDead

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TheSylentType's Notes

Would love feedback on flow and rhyming, peace!

//Verse by TheSylentType
Fresh out of high school
man these times so cool
Laying at the local pool
Watching my reflection in the water
 
Never cared too pay attention, didn't bother
How I behaved or looked, a person overlooked
Now I got time, too enjoy summertime
Sunshine on my spine, sippin' wine
Writing these bars line for line
Summer, summer time is fine (2x)
 
The warmth of this place
All alone in my personal space
No one bothering, smothering me
Finally at ease, it's something don't disagree
Stopped acting like me, now I'm free
To see the world in his true beauty
It feels so much better now at peace
 
Midnight wandering through the city
Starting to feast on the neon lights, no pity
 
People luring me in a hip hop bar
Gave me the impression of being a superstar
Seduced by a showgirl
With great discretion got a special session
It's an inner fight to let her go that pretty pretty girl
 
Then the clouds became a sunblock
Rain drizzling, sizzling on the hot pavement
Sitting alone on the boardwalk
No one interacts, changed behavin'
Watched my reflection in the water
That's when I realized
That I became characterized, demoralized
By holding a mirror In my goddamn face
Bringing utter horror to my birthplace
Disappointed everyone who matters
Acted like they were stupid actors
But now I found my place
Let's go to the next phase
 
Working hard lately
to get back in touch with everybody
It's a struggle daily
Being humble and shaky
Disembodied for the ground
Never got somebody to make proud
In order to get back in touch with you
I will have to stay true to this nobody
 
//Verse by RickGrimesIsDead
that nobody could be somebody......
it was me climbed above the challengers
and took my seat overcame struggles and despair
now i think, before i didn't care
i was on a one man mission to death
then my friend took his last breath
changed my whole attitude towards life
he would want me to settle down and get a wife
and kids and be the greatest dad and have the family that he couldn't have
so i changed my world and now i'm here now
when i'm crying they're only happy tears

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