Down for me G-Eazy (rewrite)

Yo, so my girl loves G-Eazy, and i am not really used to his style and flow, but I rewrote the first and second verses of this song for her. Can anybody tell me if it is good before I spit it to her?

 

Verse 1

 

Uh,

feeling inspired and feeling proud,

Every day, it's the same, going through your town

And I love to pick you up, just to drive around

She loves orange juice, and she laughs at scary clowns

Second date we watched Rocky

Third date the office and a bit of gnocci

She loves veal, but not as much as g-eazy

She gets him, I get Underwood, we agreed

Uh, she even smokes a bit of my weed,

She lives far, but she always wants to see me,

Facebooked, then all my friends went crazy

Still don't know how I got so lucky

 

Yeah, girl I really like you, I'm not ashamed

I mean it's insane, that you even know my name,

Hiding toonies and loonies because it's our game,

But girl my life has changed since the day that you came, yeah

 

 

Verse 2

 

 

Yeah,

somethings going on, I just want to convey,

That your gorgeous smile, always brightens up my day,

And I love the way you say things like Tecum(say)"

Always in denial about how much you weigh

With you, time is always short, though we chill long

I'm not good at expressing feelings so here's a song

Study dates, it's hard to focus, you got it going on

I love how welcome I feel with your stepdad and mom

I'll always treat you with respect, and know this

You are beautiful, even if you haven't noticed

Because I did, and I love how you can throw fists

A cute karate girl, in her Timmies outfit

 

Uh, I could go on and on

I look at you and see such an amazing person

Every day I learn more, so I wait for the sun,

She says, "see you at one?" and I'm already gone, yeah