Battle
• Written by MindInPieces
I must be mistaken, did I say to create a rap about a Break-Up?
I can't even gain some definition what you said is plain dumb?
So lay on your great thumb, and twiddle and listen
To my literal spitting, and criticism, of your illiterate lyrics.
I take a vacation, is that what you meant to say son,
when you made a statement to write in relation to breaks huh?
Man, I would take one if I had made such a lame song, as Your Love
or Oo Ee, stupid name, call it foo-e, cause I wave it, it's too cheap.
And I am greater than you'd be if Jaden Smith gave you his looseleaf.
Furthermore, have you heard of boar? It's a type of pig.
It's also me, add a "D", when I have to listen to your writing.
The intelligence level resembles a seven-year-old.
Your grammar is stupid like someone slammed your neurons
And jammed, with a toothpick, your two cents, and too, your sense
of what can be credited as, and said to be music.
27 lines, no, Heaven's my home, cause compared to the loser first,
I come across looking like a divine phantom, you'd be cursed.
Take your pants home, they're sagging. I took your belt, as a rap king.
Even fax machine, Eminem, when he rapped his own track called Relapse it's.
Real bad, I feel that rhyming sight twice in my eyes doesn't provide king status.
Seven lines left, I'd guess you find that I already won this, my head
is above his, I'm divine, your under, I see why, you hunger
To beat guys, but disqualifying cause the rules you write I can't under-
Stand, after this you'll be my first fan, cause you stay till Thursday
Reading my body of work to gain, any knowledge on how to make
Great lyrics. For a second battle, my schedule I have cleared, then.
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MindInPieces
Member since March 18 2020