battel (help me to improve)

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I ain't a rapper just another Stan of marshal Mather

I was trying to write dope rhymes and i came

with some dope rhymes and I’m gonna make you choke this time

b'cuz I’m outta ma mind

I’ll put my di** in your mouth;

Will you scream loud,eh loud?

Don’t be proud if you can rap

you think you can beat me in

The fuckin game of rap

You keep thinking to beat me man,

And I’m doing it to you like a rain man

A fuckin mike in my hand, my opponent gonna sing Stan

‘You look like a dead fish in the pan’

‘Greater love hath no man’

You like a bitch who just want to diss

A truth will set you free

That you ain’t a rapper

He-he

Do you still thinking to defeat me?

It’s a battle between you and me

Why A bitch was smiling on me?

I think she never heard the stories of

‘The devil and the deep blue sea’

raping ain’t easy as abc

Agree?

The apple doesn’t fall too far from the tree

Gravity

My opponent want to f*** me

Bit he ain't got no vocabulary

You should spend some time in library

One day you will get married and

Your girlfriend’s Pu**y as red as cherry

I love to eat RAPberries

You pay money to facebook to promote

Your fuckin page I have no money to pay

I do fight in a cage

Mma

You are a money man,then go

purchase a condom and put it on your nerdy face.