Lyrical Mixture (Not completed y...

last time you won,

this time.. I'm making sure that was your last time

and i see what you doing with your lines

every line in your rap was so short.. can hardly be called a sentence

three words in every line, one word among them is always rhyming

so it sounds catchy to the ears, and easy for readers to go by them

that's why I'm wasting this verse to ground this thought in your minds

it's not necessary to sound good, for a rap song, to be good

stop rhyming every second or third word or every line, and

use that time in combining real lyrical mixture to spellbind ventures

 

your raps are whack, all caps, nothing legit

and when you rappin a heart breaking line of it

the line, your flow, and your heart breaks with it

on a course with a bop chorus and dope chords

my pen verses a curse of black magic

scares the crap out of all rappers

your verses against mineare like crackers among hydrogen bombs

my pen is the activator.. you crack, and i pin down the detonator

and you'll be non existing, a Player Unknown in the Battleground