My Reality

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DukeOfGravity's Notes

The song is from 2 perspectives one of a guy and one of a girl, All the girls parts are in brackets.I just found this website and just had a go at writing something without stop.

As I walk up the stairs and puts my key in the lock
its a shock, to see the door unlocked before four o clock
as I hop inside to see what the commotions about
hands are rugged from working overtime on the docks
What the fuck? light switch wont even turn on man that's a bust
flash light is on to guide through my dark maze of a house
hear a loud sound coming from my room like a howl
walks in "o wow", what the fuck is this all about?
Answer me bitch! or im fucking calling the cops!
thought I was done with your shit by dumping your ass slut!
wait! what's that clicking sound? that a fucking gun?
Why'd you do it John? Why'd you have to leave me last month?)- girls voice
Last month? bitch you crazy we went out last year!
ooo dear, aaah hun stop pointing the gun over here
hand me the weapon and we can sort this out ok dear?
(fuck you John! you ruined everything my life and my career) - girls voice
(you tried to strangle me and you killed our first child Blair)
(ill never forgive you no not not in a million years!)
(after I shoot you and my self we'l be together up there)
NO NO baby listen please its not true you're just sick
we've fought about this we dont have kids they DONT EXIST
we only were together for a mere half a year
But you're the one who tried to kill me and started acting weird
it started out with you saying weird things and you'd always stare
I took you to the doctor and she said she had no clue/idea
she'd never seen such severe Schizophrenia in her career
speaking of the doctor who let you out? where's doctor Ruthgeer?
(She's outside in the car waiting, nice of her to lend me her ride) -girls voice
But I didn't see anyone in that car parked across from the drive?
(Oops! didn't I mention she's not in the front?) - girls voice
(Don't worry John she's just taking a nap in the trunk)
(I made sure she's not alone I chopped her up in chunks)
You, you what? holy shit you're a crazy bitch
(I wouldn't move if I were you john my finger could slip) - girls voice
It doesn't matter what I do, you're going to kill me aren't you
well go ahed get it done with, I'm sorry I ever loved you
 
(Bang!, Bang!, Bang!) John gets shot three times, The girl points the gun at
her own temple (click) (Bang)
 
I open my eyes, Why is everything so damm bright?
Wait, was that a dream or did that happen in real life?
I hear noises, laughter, kids talking outside
I get out of bed walk out, I cant believe my fucking eyes!
three little kids run at me, I hear the horn of a bus
Daddy hey, Daddy woo, Daddy will you come play with us?
(get your school bag blair, tony and you angus) - girls voice
(the bus is outside! you boys will be late now quick rush)
(Kiss your daddy goodbye we'l pick you up after lunch!)
Bye daddy and mommy hey Blair, tony wait up!
Ahhhhh Honey are we like dead?
Don't mind me asking BUT DIDN'T YOU SHOOT ME IN THE HEAD?
(what in the world are you talking about John?) - girls voice
(we were out surfing all day all day in the sun?)
I can surf? and how did we afford this huge house
(Course you can surf John remember that accident you had)- girls voice
(Im just glad you woke up out that coma so fast)
(I told you honey You were out for at least 23 days)
( I was starting to worry that you'd never recover so id prey
(every night for you're health to be right)
23 days? no no way 23 years is my damm age!
(john you're in you're late 30s at least) - girls voice
( im scared you keep talking about some girl in your sleep)
(talking about how she killed a doctor and you start to screem)
(Im worried do we need to take you to see Dr Ruthgeer you see?)
No no its fine I'm just having trouble adjusting
 
And just then it finally hit me
My whole life growing up i just wanted to be rich see
I used to prey to be a pro at surfing
with a big house nice wife and a couple kids with me
I still don't know what's real and what's fictonary
All I know is reality
is what you believe to be rational normality.
 
 
 
 

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