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Mockingbird Remix- (finished)
- [VERSE:1]
- Once upon a time i wrote my first rhyme, practiced and then one day
- started rapping at school, thought i was cool, man, the blacks said white boys can't rap.
- Then all hope inside of me collapsed, so i thought, i stopped rapping for a year then
- comes along my baby girls. I treat my daughters like pearls. On a Saturday night at 10 pm
- a murder coincided, one of my daughters died, then the next one was me.
- Feeling threatened, unsettled, rattled, frozen in place feeling shackled
- Then I thought of my daughters and became filled with fury inside
- Moved 1 inch then another, then im at full capacity. Fuck Insanity, i use profanity.
- The man came at me with a shank, defending myself with a plank of wood.
- Ahh!! i needa get outta this hood man. Next thing i know i see the man turn to somebody else
- This man has a dim heart.
- Next thing i know, im getting slower, the man started after me again.
- The suspense was so much i pulled out my glock and shot his ass
- This moment will be everlasting in my nightmares, gives me a scare.
- Tears a whole in my heart and soul, becoming famous and getting money
- to raise my 3 daughters is the goal, has been the whole time, so i put up
- my past and rhyme.
- [Chorus:]
- Now hush little baby, don't you cry
- Everything's gonna be alright
- Stiffen that upper lip up, little lady, I told ya
- Daddy's here to hold ya through the night
- I know mommy's not here right now and we don't know why
- We feel how we feel inside
- It may seem a little crazy, pretty baby
- But I promise mama's gon' be alright
- [VERSE:2]
- It's another day again
- I see my baby crying
- Screaming
- Don't leave me
- I'm not leaving
- no more
- I thought I only needed god
- But fuck that all I need is my baby girl
- when I feel like I died
- She's the only one I need in the world
- Cause suddenly
- I'm not crazy
- (Well not that much)
- When I look in her eyes
- No lies
- Baby be a strong soldier
- even when I'm not there
- To fight of your night mares
- Dry your eyes
- Because I'm here
- And there's nothing to now to fear
- come on baby grab my hand
- don't be scared
- We'll walk this road together
- I'll try my best to be here
- forever
- Sometimes it seems impossible
- when I got people trying to make my life a living hell
- I get it I can be failure and just fail
- cause sometimes it feels like the world's on my shoulders
- everyone's leaning on me
- cause sometimes it feels like the world's almost over
- But she comes running back to me
- But my baby girl
- knows I'm a soldier
- no one can take her from me
- but to her im superman
- she's my number one fan
- god I'm happy I got her
- I don't know how to express how much love I have for my baby any futher
- all I got to do is my booboo face
- and she comes and hugs me
- asks What's wrong
- Nothing baby I'm just trying to finish this song
- But she inspired me to write this one
- if I could find a way to express how I feel I'd keep doing this song for my daughter
- how glade I am I got her
- imma watch you grow
- And shine
- And make a sign
- so you'll always know
- As long as
- One and one is two
- There will never be another father
- Who love's their daughter more than I do
- the first time
- She smiled at me
- My heart skipped a beat
- you don't know how much you mean to me
- Not the slightest I would always be there for you
- Well I'm here
- And im not going anywhere baby
- I love you
- [Chorus:]
- Now hush little baby, don't you cry
- Everything's gonna be alright
- Stiffen that upper lip up, little lady, I told ya
- Daddy's here to hold ya through the night
- I know mommy's not here right now and we don't know why
- We feel how we feel inside
- It may seem a little crazy, pretty baby
- But I promise mama's gon' be alright
- And if you ask me to
- Daddy's gonna buy you a mockingbird
- I'mma give you the world
- I'mma buy a diamond ring for you
- I'mma sing for you
- I'll do anything for you to see you smile
- And if that mockingbird don't sing and that ring don't shine
- I'mma break that birdie's neck
- I'll go back to the jeweler who sold it to ya
- And make him swallow every fucking carat, yeah don't fuck with dad (ha ha ha)
- [VERSE:3]
- ask yourself one question in life am i everything that i want to be is there any
- thing else i need to fix or add in my life that would make it better well this is
- what i would do listen cause this is fate.
- The father he'd never know,
- And this all of this goes to show,
- There's a way that we all can go,
- To the safety we call our own,
- In a life, that we cannot own.
- Glass on a broken picture,
- We left it to die in vain.
- It brings back all of the nightmares,
- And bolsters all of the pain.
- You ask me why I'm insane,
- And I'll tell you all just the same.
- It's a way that we all relate.
- It's something' you can't debate
- Literal history, the start of a darkened mystery,
- The lyrics of life that filled me
- The era of a lunatic
- Foolish and crazy ruthless
- I am the opportunist
- The justice i give is unfinished.
- And mean while my dreams were being diminished by doubt.
- I'm just in love with spitting profound lyrics.
- Gotta stay optimistic through this pain.
- Im so psychotic people believe me to be inhumane.
- Truth is man, im insane, but sane. It's just to help overcome the pain.
- and i have to Ascertain what you're saying, cause my trust isn't strong.
- Man, every day i'm prone just to do something wrong.
- I could keep spittin for more than an hour long, but
- im just here to tell my story and y'all need to quit acting like your my advesary.
- [Chorus:]
- Now hush little baby, don't you cry
- Everything's gonna be alright
- Stiffen that upper lip up, little lady, I told ya
- Daddy's here to hold ya through the night
- I know mommy's not here right now and we don't know why
- We feel how we feel inside
- It may seem a little crazy, pretty baby
- But I promise mama's gon' be alright
- [VERSE:4]
- I can't even begin to comprehend the amount of manic scenes I showed
- Depressive, suddenly my mood changes
- I've got so many phases and faces that you couldn't even fuck with me
- Because you see
- I am not, But i am
- I change more that the whore dancing on the penthouse floor for yours
- And mine
- But what's yours is mine
- It hasn't even crossed my mind
- that I am fucking Psychotic
- Every time I try and do right, it feels so wrong
- and every time i know that its wrong, it feels so right
- probably because of all the times i hit the bong
- Am i the only one that feels this way tonight?
- Of course I'm a Psycho if you can't already tell
- I wonder sometimes why I'm not locked up in a cell
- I never feel well but I have got to stay sane for my little girls.
- [Chorus:]
- Now hush little baby, don't you cry
- Everything's gonna be alright
- Stiffen that upper lip up, little lady, I told ya
- Daddy's here to hold ya through the night
- I know mommy's not here right now and we don't know why
- We feel how we feel inside
- It may seem a little crazy, pretty baby
- But I promise mama's gon' be alright
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