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coulda been me
- Lets take for instance,
- I write far from a distance.
- Got you near sided,
- Took all your breath
- Left you hanging with no excitement
- Now your face turning black
- Like the color of death
- Now your body layz to rest!
- Where goes your soul?
- For that answer has never been untold
- For everyone has an explanation,
- But think about it…
- No one really knows
- For all the lies that have been said
- And the truths that are untold
- What does it matter
- When your tears hit the ice
- and they break and they shatter
- What is this life we living?
- When people are taking and forsaking
- For everything that we’ve been giving?
- It’s like being in a roller coaster
- Strapped in the seat
- On the way up
- I am grittin my teeth
- While I’m strollin to the TOP
- I’m feelin the heat
- Cause I know I’m bout to drop
- everything that I keep.
- What’s the point I’m getting at?
- I don’t even know
- I just picked this pen up 60 seconds ago
- Waiting for something to happen as I write these words on this page
- What am I trying to say
- Cause my thoughts are just fading away!
- As I turn on the TV
- I see nothing but reality
- As these people living they lives
- And they faking their cries
- And they laughing with their evil demons inside
- I’m not understanding what this world is coming to
- Well…maybe I’m not suppose to know
- And just go with they flow
- But there is something inside telling me to figure it out
- I need to know and find out what it’s all about.
- I picked up my friend from the block a couple of months ago
- Now I’m high and faded a couple of blunts ago
- In between her breast there lies a tattoo
- Of a spider
- With eight legs that’s crawling on me
- from the vibe I feel from inside her.
- I start to get the sensation
- Luring through my fingers
- As she come towards me
- And our bodyz start to Lingure.
- She was making me hot
- As I felt the heat on my neck.
- It felt like the room was on fire!
- I looked in her eyes and saw her desire
- As she withered my neck and gave me a whisper
- I knew right then and there
- She wanted me to kiss her.
- I closed my eyes and held my breath.
- She told me to “RELAX”
- Now all that heat strolled from my neck down to my back
- Giving me this tingling sensation
- She was making me hot
- As I felt the heat on my neck.
- It felt like the room was on fire!
- I looked in her eyes and saw her desire
- As she withered my neck and gave me a whisper
- I knew right then and there
- She wanted me to kiss her.
- I closed my eyes and held my breath.
- She told me to “RELAX”
- Now all that heat strolled from my neck down to my back
- Giving me this tingling sensation
- Using all five senses
- Without any imagination
- I know I was about to go on a joy ride of my life
- And this ticket was free
- But the thing was…
- I couldn’t really see!
- Then all of a sudden the remote fell to the floor
- It sounded like a knock on the bedroom door
- Then I looked up and stared at the TV.
- It was on channel 69
- Before it hit the floor
- Now it is on channel 68.
- The discovery channel found me with a slithering snake!
- At the time I was high
- And I knew this feeling wasn’t right
- Cause when I closed my legs
- She wanted to fight
- Like the snake on TV
- That was tempting to strike
- Her eyes that tried to seduce me
- Just turned to evil
- Like I see in some of these people
- Everything that night
- Fell right into place
- As I was about to make my life’s worst mistake.
- It was like a sign from God
- From the heavens above
- That save me again
- As though I thought this gurl
- Was only but a friend
- It all came to an end
- When I put out her fire
- That was burning her desire
- SIX MONTHS LATER…
- I run into at the club
- She asked me to follow her to her car
- I was like okay… but she isn’t going to get me that far
- L
- She was begging me please
- I knew she was serious
- When she fell to her knees
- Then she cried to me...she said, “YaYa, I have HIV”
- In the back of my mind
- I was like “DAMN the TV”
- If I didn’t look up
- This could have been ME
By Anonymous
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